Deliver a Virgin

I completely loved this story... it was Amazing. ..but coming from a Fantastic writer as yourself. .. I expected no less.... plz ensure you write more..of this story.. it certainly is Awesome. ...

5 stars,buuut...........

Saracens don't have foreskins......(part and parcel of the religion,you know). Love the twist at the end! (Of your story, not on penises!!)

Wrong and Right

5 star, buttt is both wrong and right on foreskins in the story. It's not a Saracen who practices docking on the young captive, it's a Seljuk Turk chief. So, the comment's wrong on that. It's right on the foreskin issue, though, as the Seljuk Turks also cut the foreskin of their males when they are boys. I didn't overlook this, I ignored it for the purpose of the story, for which docking was significant. But I should have had just the captive (who was Christian) with the foreskin. That could have worked. I just didn't think of doing that at the time. I use literary license when it suits me.