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Written well enough, but too much was a repeat of Ch. 1 and the end was a bit of an anti-climax. I was expecting her to have some perverted demand when it came to the crunch.
Yes Santa,
there is a Virginia!
Don't listen to critics who hide behind their keyboard. Less suspense and playing as the first chapter, but still a helluva story. Descriptive, sexy and takes the reader aling with Derek as he relishes every detail of Virginia.
Makes one want MORE!
Damn it! Won't let me log in
Lee
L.smth3@gmail.com
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