All Comments on 'Shemale Sisters Ch. 01: Creating a Slut'

by hfernandez1983

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Bloody brilliant!

I loved reading this story. The pictures were fantastic too! Well done!!

magnum815568magnum815568almost 8 years ago
Excellent story

Fab story - loved it, chapter 2 should include Jasmine's mother

parputter69parputter69almost 8 years ago
Way to go!

Very good. Hope you post Chapter 2 soon. Poor Jasmine did not get to climax with Priyanka.

chimpeechimpeealmost 8 years ago
SHEMALES RULE

Superb start and superb graphics agree with magnum Jasmine's need a good sorting

perhaps she can struggle throughout as all four give her a good seeing to

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved It

The images of young Indian women were amazing! I loved their bodies and the fact that you could tell their ethnicity from the graphics. Great story. The continuation should include the mother.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Fantastic!

What a fantastic story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hot Hot Hot.

Great detailed story and graphics. Very hot. Was hard the whole time reading it. I bet all three of these hung hot bitches are uncut as well. Nothing more sexy than a dominate hot hung bitch who likes to have her huge uncut meat worshipped. Very hot indeed.

Templar_WriterTemplar_Writerover 7 years ago
Another Winner

So far I have enjoyed all of your stories, particularly the amazing artwork. I am glad to see you have added more since last looked. I can't wait to see more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Unreal!!

Great stories & the images were a great touch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing

This story was amazing I loved it and enjoyed how you used screenshots to aid the story, where those from the sexvilla site? Also I would love to see them fuck the mother in front of the daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
FANTASTIC

My cock was throbbing while reading this story. So hot hot hot. And the pictures made it real. PLEASE PLEASE continue with more of this especially include the mother and daughter together getting tagged teamed together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot

Are you indian by any chance? I love your stories

angieanalslutangieanalslutover 6 years ago
Cockslut hot n Bothered

A great story!! HOT HOT HOT MY TESTICLES ARE FULL N BOILING!! Please keep writing these type of stories!! I Luv Them!!🤙😘😘😘✅

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
HORNY AND WAITING

PLEASE DON'T KEEP US WAITING WITH OUR BLOOD BOILING FOR THE 2ND INSTALLMENT. TEASING US WITHOUT THE FOLLOW UP IS KEEPING US HARD WAITING. PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER.

DexterFairfieldDexterFairfieldalmost 6 years ago
What Happened?

What happened to the sequel when the mother gets fucked too. Such good sequel potential. I love how much physical fucking with commentary you have in this story. Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot! Hot

Still waiting for the sequel! Would love to see the mother added!

Rapier875Rapier875about 5 years ago
This is going be yet another of the many unfinished stories on here, isn't it ?

So damn frustrating !

MaddogicudMaddogicudalmost 5 years ago
Waiting for more! Please add to this

Would love to see how the mother does

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

I really love this story and hope it will continue.

magic10fingers4magic10fingers4almost 4 years ago
OMG!

Your graphics and story - ripping raw! More!

mioelcidmioelcidover 3 years ago
excellent

More, please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Damn! This shit was so fucking hot! The part where Jasmine was double penetrated by those hung tranny sisters, made me my cock explode!

Please! Write a sequel with the three trannies running a train on the mother! I'm begging you!

faiblfaiblover 2 years ago

Рассказ прекрасен, а иллюстрации еще больше добавляют драйва и возбуждения. Очень жду продолжения ..... может быть у жасмин есть младший брат? )))

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very sexy and it should be continued with the mother joining in...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You are one of the best on this site. But like all the others, we are promised more but never get more. This story was written 5 years ago with the promise of chapter 2. Never happened. Bummer

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

very sexy, should bring her mother in and get her involved especially shemales and mother daughter orgy..

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