All Comments on 'Tamed by His Love'

by Andracarlez

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More please asap

Well, for your first story you're off to a great start! Looking forward to seeing what happens to Derek and Ansel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
That was HOT!!

I love the story and the characters, darm you are talented. Can't wait for the next update. aaaigh! As this i your first work ignore haters you will get em rem they just lack talent. Keep writing.

canndcanndalmost 8 years ago
Look FWD to more

Please keep Ansel's fire and left him stand up to Derek even though he had these feelings for him. It was great seeing Derek caught off guard by Ansel not kissing his ass like everyone. I hope Derek can become a bit vulnerable with Ansel too. Clearly the mask he wears is tiring him out. Great start!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Amazing story, Amazing Author

I love, love, loved the story. Please update soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very Hot!

Nice first time you story virgin. I liked it. You made Me hard anywayπŸ˜‰. More please!

homecomingqueenhomecomingqueenalmost 8 years ago
Honestly, you did all the work

Loved it! Keep going, it's better than awesome. Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Keep going!

Keep going. It was a bit choppy at first but you have a good story here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hot

Loving it, keep going.

baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 8 years ago
Very good start

Please continue!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Oh yes, give me more!

I imagine Derek can have a bit of dark hair on his muscular chest; and if he can bring himself to suck Ansel too, then all the better. These two might have a future ahead of them, and maybe it could even involve love!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Can I have more????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Jeez

Derek is why tasers and restraining orders were invented. Fucking abusive dick. And where does he get off judging his mother when he treats women the same as his mother's random fucks? I get that he's angry, hates his life, but there's no excuse for what he does to make himself feel better. People like him create cutters, school shooters, and tragic suicides.

adjoaqadjoaqalmost 8 years ago
Good start!

Keep em coming luv...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
ooooooh!

So good! I like that he is an ass,but he KNOWS it,and is getting weary of it! I like Ansel's spine! I can't wait to read more! 5 stars!

sj_53sj_53almost 8 years ago
Great first story

Keep it going. I think these guys have a future.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
First story? You sure?

Damn i loved it! Sure hope theres gonna be a sequel ^_^

AndracarlezAndracarlezalmost 8 years agoAuthor
thanks for all the love ❀😚

I'm so happy seeing all these comments,so motivated, and i can't wait to post chapter two. Life's bullshit is going to make the post take a little while. So sorry. Unexpected annoyances. But I'm committed and I'll be back honey. .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You need to continue this . . .

This is a great story, and I love rocky beginnings. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please Continue !!

Very nice, I hope to see this continue. The one person to break through his bluster and bullshit. I think this can go places. 5 Stars !!

SorensenSorensenalmost 8 years ago
Keep it going

It's awesome love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More... I want more..

please post next chapter...maybe turn it into a series.

that'd be great...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Definitely want a second chapter!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 7 years ago
Very good

Please continue

Beauty888Beauty888about 7 years ago
More!

Please write us more, it's really good! Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
PLEASE DONT LEAVE US HANGING!!!!

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY IT'S REALLY GOOD

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well done!

Really well done, please give us more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Are u ever going to finish?????

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