by Andracarlez
Well, for your first story you're off to a great start! Looking forward to seeing what happens to Derek and Ansel.
I love the story and the characters, darm you are talented. Can't wait for the next update. aaaigh! As this i your first work ignore haters you will get em rem they just lack talent. Keep writing.
Please keep Ansel's fire and left him stand up to Derek even though he had these feelings for him. It was great seeing Derek caught off guard by Ansel not kissing his ass like everyone. I hope Derek can become a bit vulnerable with Ansel too. Clearly the mask he wears is tiring him out. Great start!
I love, love, loved the story. Please update soon :)
Nice first time you story virgin. I liked it. You made Me hard anywayπ. More please!
Loved it! Keep going, it's better than awesome. Can't wait to read more.
Keep going. It was a bit choppy at first but you have a good story here.
I imagine Derek can have a bit of dark hair on his muscular chest; and if he can bring himself to suck Ansel too, then all the better. These two might have a future ahead of them, and maybe it could even involve love!
Derek is why tasers and restraining orders were invented. Fucking abusive dick. And where does he get off judging his mother when he treats women the same as his mother's random fucks? I get that he's angry, hates his life, but there's no excuse for what he does to make himself feel better. People like him create cutters, school shooters, and tragic suicides.
So good! I like that he is an ass,but he KNOWS it,and is getting weary of it! I like Ansel's spine! I can't wait to read more! 5 stars!
Damn i loved it! Sure hope theres gonna be a sequel ^_^
I'm so happy seeing all these comments,so motivated, and i can't wait to post chapter two. Life's bullshit is going to make the post take a little while. So sorry. Unexpected annoyances. But I'm committed and I'll be back honey. .
This is a great story, and I love rocky beginnings. Please continue.
Very nice, I hope to see this continue. The one person to break through his bluster and bullshit. I think this can go places. 5 Stars !!
please post next chapter...maybe turn it into a series.
that'd be great...
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY IT'S REALLY GOOD