Looking forward to more!
Why are you wasting our time posting a snippet of a story???
... makes me waiting for more. But: take care for the misspellings.
Anxious to see where this goes
Chapter 2 is longer. This is something that came to me while stuck in traffic.. My friend encouraged me to post it but I didn't want to go further if no interest. Have a good day.
Please continue, I'd love to see how this story unfolds!
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Beautiful crafted
Looking forward to more!
Seriously???
Why are you wasting our time posting a snippet of a story???
A good start...
... makes me waiting for more.
But: take care for the misspellings.
Short
Anxious to see where this goes
Thank you
Chapter 2 is longer. This is something that came to me while stuck in traffic.. My friend encouraged me to post it but I didn't want to go further if no interest.
Have a good day.
Nice beginning!
Please continue, I'd love to see how this story unfolds!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Peaches and Cream Ch. 01 or
More submissions by ncpecanpie.