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Kissing Cousins Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by ardo04/21/16

nice

More please !

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by Anonymous04/21/16

More

Great start! You've got my attention. More please.

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by prop6904/21/16

My cock is hard

chapter 2 and more

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by Anonymous04/22/16

Great start!

Very erotic. I wish we knew more about Betty's personality (and that of the narrator, for that matter). But I know from experience that childish games can stick in the mind and pattern the neurons!
--Fingermeister

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by sabra1602304/22/16

Keep Going

You have a great start on a story that needs to be finished. Thanks

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by Dark_Storm04/22/16

Where's the beef?

I hate serial stories that don't have any sex action in the first chapter. Nothing like leaving your readers with blue balls.

However, I am interested enough to read the next chapter to see where this goes. If it is a second chapter with nothing but foreplay, I'll move on.

Only three stars, for leaving us frustrated.

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by Anonymous04/23/16

Don't stop now

I'm hard as a rock

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by Reb186111/18/16

please keep this one going. You soon at a point that it should have kept going. I'm stuck but excited too see more on this

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