More please !
Great start! You've got my attention. More please.
chapter 2 and more
Very erotic. I wish we knew more about Betty's personality (and that of the narrator, for that matter). But I know from experience that childish games can stick in the mind and pattern the neurons! --Fingermeister
You have a great start on a story that needs to be finished. Thanks
I hate serial stories that don't have any sex action in the first chapter. Nothing like leaving your readers with blue balls. However, I am interested enough to read the next chapter to see where this goes. If it is a second chapter with nothing but foreplay, I'll move on. Only three stars, for leaving us frustrated.
I'm hard as a rock
please keep this one going. You soon at a point that it should have kept going. I'm stuck but excited too see more on this
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More please !
More
Great start! You've got my attention. More please.
My cock is hard
chapter 2 and more
Great start!
Very erotic. I wish we knew more about Betty's personality (and that of the narrator, for that matter). But I know from experience that childish games can stick in the mind and pattern the neurons!
--Fingermeister
Keep Going
You have a great start on a story that needs to be finished. Thanks
Where's the beef?
I hate serial stories that don't have any sex action in the first chapter. Nothing like leaving your readers with blue balls.
However, I am interested enough to read the next chapter to see where this goes. If it is a second chapter with nothing but foreplay, I'll move on.
Only three stars, for leaving us frustrated.
Don't stop now
I'm hard as a rock
please keep this one going. You soon at a point that it should have kept going. I'm stuck but excited too see more on this
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