Hey, Vic. I truly loved your story. I must be like most boys, even tho I've seen 6 decades come and go. I still remember when I was very small peeping at my mom and she bathes. Even at a very very young age, I was mesmerized with her large full breasts. I'd love to see "Mom" and Allan have a totally full fuck session with the whole work gang chiming in. Or Allan and the real son turn out to be school buddies, and.....Thanks for the great story
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Anonymous05/16/05
Every Kid Peeks
Hey, I think every kid, boy and girl, like to peek and see what every one looks like. Don't know how many get the chance to go farther. Maybe more than I think. Good story.
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Anonymous12/11/05
I enjoyed this story
Hi Vic,
I think this story relies on phantasy, but in part. Otherwise how could you imagine the sex pages of mom-son pics and films?
Sure, that beside the money, some actors and actresses enjoy what they do before the camera.
I enjoyed this story too accompanied with a solo play.
Congratulations!
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Anonymous10/18/06
I was distracted by
your calling a 40 year old woman a girl. I can tell you're young but you still need to make your writing age appropriate.
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Anonymous01/05/07
conversation
I liked the idea that she got interested in her son because of the modeling shoot, but confronting her son about fulfilling the fantasy doesn't sound realistic. She should've seduced him, instead of directly talking him into it.
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Anonymous02/23/07
May some furutre promise here ....
Interesting story line but I like them a little more believable. Nice start , but continue working on specific details, Vic.
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Anonymous09/22/07
Not realistic at all
sure it was a good idea for a story but you rushed it and it wasn't at all realistic. did you really think it would be believable at all? if so then you definatly are stuck in a fantasy world. I'm thinking your fairly young but maybe once you've gotten a little older and mature you could write a decent story but for now stay away from posting your writting.
You did a premise I haven't seen yet, but it was a little uncomfortable. I would work a little on your story flow.
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Anonymous09/04/16
As It Should Be
I have always believed mothers and fathers, sons and daughters should be able to freely give in to basic instincts and needs with one another. It isn't wrong, it's healthy for all. Daughters and Sons should have their first, and continuing sex with their Fathers and Moms. Why not as long as no one is forcing anything?
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Vic, I loved your Mom fuck story. Do more.
Hey, Vic. I truly loved your story. I must be like most boys, even tho I've seen 6 decades come and go. I still remember when I was very small peeping at my mom and she bathes. Even at a very very young age, I was mesmerized with her large full breasts. I'd love to see "Mom" and Allan have a totally full fuck session with the whole work gang chiming in. Or Allan and the real son turn out to be school buddies, and.....Thanks for the great story
Every Kid Peeks
Hey, I think every kid, boy and girl, like to peek and see what every one looks like. Don't know how many get the chance to go farther. Maybe more than I think. Good story.
I enjoyed this story
Hi Vic,
I think this story relies on phantasy, but in part. Otherwise how could you imagine the sex pages of mom-son pics and films?
Sure, that beside the money, some actors and actresses enjoy what they do before the camera.
I enjoyed this story too accompanied with a solo play.
Congratulations!
I was distracted by
your calling a 40 year old woman a girl. I can tell you're young but you still need to make your writing age appropriate.
conversation
I liked the idea that she got interested in her son because of the modeling shoot, but confronting her son about fulfilling the fantasy doesn't sound realistic. She should've seduced him, instead of directly talking him into it.
May some furutre promise here ....
Interesting story line but I like them a little more believable. Nice start , but continue working on specific details, Vic.
Not realistic at all
sure it was a good idea for a story but you rushed it and it wasn't at all realistic. did you really think it would be believable at all? if so then you definatly are stuck in a fantasy world. I'm thinking your fairly young but maybe once you've gotten a little older and mature you could write a decent story but for now stay away from posting your writting.
Modeling? Try porn
You did a premise I haven't seen yet, but it was a little uncomfortable. I would work a little on your story flow.
As It Should Be
I have always believed mothers and fathers, sons and daughters should be able to freely give in to basic instincts and needs with one another. It isn't wrong, it's healthy for all. Daughters and Sons should have their first, and continuing sex with their Fathers and Moms. Why not as long as no one is forcing anything?
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