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by Anonymous03/13/04

questions

where do you come from
what source this perfect view
what hands held the brain that
imagines new existance into our world
or is it another part?
every eye should have the opportunity
we have had this morning, this day ~J

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by Angeline03/13/04

Oh so beautiful

Sometimes your poetry just grabs my heart; I felt this poem like sunshine sp. Yes, gospel. :)

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