Very hot. Now that he's fucked her face, I hope to see a new chapter where he fucks her pussy.
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Anonymous04/22/16
Finance consultant needed!
He gives her more than half his wages. She wants to double that. That means more than 100 percent of his wages and he thinks he can manage that? Sounds a bit like a government budget.
I'm not often impressed by one page stories, but mark this one down as gold. If this is a part one of a series, then it's a good start. Understandable back story, strong tie in to actions, good oral scene.
Maybe a little more description of what the characters look like, but as I said, if this is part one, then I'm sure part two will be just as great if not better.
Looking forward to seeing more from you!
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Anonymous04/22/16
an excellent short story, and of course
a motherly blow job is always welcome. After all, no one can treat a boy's young penis with the same love and care as his own mother. A mom has a very special affection for her own kid's penis. When it's soft and just hanging down over his balls, she thinks it's so darn cute she could cry. When her boy's penis is hard and thick and reaching for the sky, when it's a big fat throbbing cock, her motherly cunt runs like a river. And that points to the next stage in this hot saga. As the Man of the House, the son by right has unlimited access to the cunt he came out of. His cock should be up his mother's cunt more than it's just jumping around in his pants. He should be fucking his mom whenever he gets the slightest urge. Fucking her pushed up against the wall and bent over the kitchen counter. Climbing on top of her and fucking her in her bed. Fucking her on the lawn at night, in the bathroom at the mall, in the back of the car, in the bedroom at grandma's place when they visit, in the lavatory on the plane on the way there. While they're watching TV he just go over and give her a quick incestuous fuck. When they're in the department store, drag her into a secluded spot, haul his cock out, and fuck her. He's the Man of the House, and the Cunt of the House--his own mother's cunt--is there for his mighty cock and for every drop of semen in his hot young balls.
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Anonymous04/23/16
More than a BJ! Draw the next one out a little more.... Great start!
Smitty
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Anonymous04/23/16
Sexy son and mom
Maybe mom can find some sexy chest hair on her son's masculine chest. Make him a real "man" in the house!
English
Very good
Very good and well written! I hope there's a part 2 coming... Thank you!
Good indeed
I enjoyed this segment of what I hope will be a longer story.
Very hot. Now that he's fucked her face, I hope to see a new chapter where he fucks her pussy.
Finance consultant needed!
He gives her more than half his wages. She wants to double that. That means more than 100 percent of his wages and he thinks he can manage that? Sounds a bit like a government budget.
Maybe in the next installment she gets a job....
I'm not often impressed by one page stories, but mark this one down as gold. If this is a part one of a series, then it's a good start. Understandable back story, strong tie in to actions, good oral scene.
Maybe a little more description of what the characters look like, but as I said, if this is part one, then I'm sure part two will be just as great if not better.
Looking forward to seeing more from you!
an excellent short story, and of course
a motherly blow job is always welcome. After all, no one can treat a boy's young penis with the same love and care as his own mother. A mom has a very special affection for her own kid's penis. When it's soft and just hanging down over his balls, she thinks it's so darn cute she could cry. When her boy's penis is hard and thick and reaching for the sky, when it's a big fat throbbing cock, her motherly cunt runs like a river. And that points to the next stage in this hot saga. As the Man of the House, the son by right has unlimited access to the cunt he came out of. His cock should be up his mother's cunt more than it's just jumping around in his pants. He should be fucking his mom whenever he gets the slightest urge. Fucking her pushed up against the wall and bent over the kitchen counter. Climbing on top of her and fucking her in her bed. Fucking her on the lawn at night, in the bathroom at the mall, in the back of the car, in the bedroom at grandma's place when they visit, in the lavatory on the plane on the way there. While they're watching TV he just go over and give her a quick incestuous fuck. When they're in the department store, drag her into a secluded spot, haul his cock out, and fuck her. He's the Man of the House, and the Cunt of the House--his own mother's cunt--is there for his mighty cock and for every drop of semen in his hot young balls.
More than a BJ! Draw the next one out a little more.... Great start!
Smitty
Sexy son and mom
Maybe mom can find some sexy chest hair on her son's masculine chest. Make him a real "man" in the house!
Excellent
Loved the story, hope that it continues.
Please continue.
Very good so far. Would love to see it proceed.
OK...
... not a bad start, but hopefully only the start.
Excellent!
Let me echo other comments: sure hope we see more!
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