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Another wonderful facet to Art..
I am here to state this man shows great talents in every endeavor of his wishes. He is a man with imagination that keeps placing him in the fore front.
There are some that after they read his works they can't find fault in his orginality so they pick upon his grammer.
They are always the short sighted mean spirited ones. They are always and will always exist.They are the ones that seem to need to be the first the best. No matter how they get there.
His talents aren't short sighted nor mean spirited his is for the pleasures of his readers.
His pleasure is to titillate the readers fron the first word to the last. This is something he does effortlessly.
Another great facet Art. Thank you from all the readers.
A Tranquil Treasure
Art, your words are awe-inspiring and a treasured gift. Thank you for sharing insights into your soul through your thoughts and poetry.
Grammar isn't the issue, it's the thoughts behind what you write that are important. LOVED THIS ONE!
:o) ~Rain
This one has some
excellent tranquil images, and you are saying something profound here. Unfortunately, the lines didn't flow together very comfortably, which made your rhyme seemed forced. I'll email you with recommendations.
jim : )
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