Great Story !
That was great
The end seems rushed. Take the time to give us more details - and hopefully more of what happens while in Hawaii!
Hope there is another chapter coming
Where was his wife and the girls mother?Was she not invited to the wedding or did you forget about her.Good story otherwise.
They are divorced, it said so earlier.
Thanks for helping me cum hard. Enjoyed the story
Oh my. . . .this is really good. I am so wet and ready for that massive big dick! Wanting more. . .
Goddammit where is page two?
Page 2? Part 2? Please tell me this doesnt end! Lol I loved it.
Please a page 2. I'm so fucking wet right now. I need a big fat cock right now!
Wondering why this doesn't show up on the author's page? Did the author remove it, or did Lit forget to add a listing there? Just wanted to point out that Claire must have a huge mouth, if she can get her mouth around a cock as "thick as a soda can".
I cummed so much over this loved the bit were she says I want u to cum inside me
So hot, and got me so wet! I love the backstory, please write another part!
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nice
Great Story !
That was great
Good, but...
The end seems rushed. Take the time to give us more details - and hopefully more of what happens while in Hawaii!
Good read
Hope there is another chapter coming
Im Lost!
Where was his wife and the girls mother?Was she not invited to the wedding or did you forget about her.Good story otherwise.
to the top comment
They are divorced, it said so earlier.
Great
Thanks for helping me cum hard. Enjoyed the story
Oh my. . . .this is really good. I am so wet and ready for that massive big dick! Wanting more. . .
Goddammit where is page two?
What!?!?!
Page 2? Part 2? Please tell me this doesnt end! Lol I loved it.
Please a page 2. I'm so fucking wet right now. I need a big fat cock right now!
OK start
Wondering why this doesn't show up on the author's page? Did the author remove it, or did Lit forget to add a listing there?
Just wanted to point out that Claire must have a huge mouth, if she can get her mouth around a cock as "thick as a soda can".
I cummed so much over this loved the bit were she says I want u to cum inside me
HOT
So hot, and got me so wet! I love the backstory, please write another part!
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