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Iron Hearts Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/23/16

Great update

Thank you for this enchanting tale and the speedy update!

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by Anonymous04/23/16

Superb

A great begining with all sorts of possibilities. Please continue but also, please proofread before posting.

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by Many_Memories04/24/16

OHHH - And you say

that The Witch of the Sea does not exist? Is her name "North Wind"?

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by arrowglass04/25/16

What a beginning!

I am hooked...hope you make the chapters longer though!

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by Anonymous05/09/16

MORE PLEASE!

I'm not yelling at you with the all-caps merely emphatically implore you to continue the story.

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by Anonymous06/10/16

Ch. 03?!?!?!?!?!?!

Craving the next chapter.

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by Anonymous09/22/16

Where is the rest??

Good beginning, now finish it.

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