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Moth Drawn to Candle

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/24/16

Horrible

Horribly written. A newborn baby could write better than this shit.

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by wylie23604/24/16

Outline

Was this supposed to be a story or an outline of an idea? Really doesn't work on either level.

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by evebroughtanaxthistime04/25/16

uhrm

Butting in! Sorry, but it's too tempting -
1. Sketch: Brief account or narrative without detail.
2. Could also be incorporated as one of the scenes in a cabaret I wouldn't mind acting in - if the 'asides' were altered to accommodate such a change.

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by goldenmyst04/25/16

Sketch

Yes this wasn't meant to be a story. It is simply an erotic skit of limited to no literary value. It wasn't intended to be such. Thanks Eve for your perceptive comment.

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