All Comments on 'Breaking Monica Ch. 03'

getting bored with the asshole bank guy, as well as the rest of the story. all we are reading over and over again is the little mouse wants to be a slut for the woman she saw as nothing more then a whore that came in and took the job she should have got by virtue of actually knowing the fucking job to someone that cant even spell the word bank.

You need to rethink this mess

I like your Stories! I Hope you are Posting more Stories.

Really looking forward to more

Over 5 years and no further chapters is par for the course in a lot of stories. We just get a bit interested and then nothing. Not the first time but there have been a few stories that suddenly picked up after 8 years or more. Should be titled maybe like "Breaking Jenna" since Jenna is kind of the main character and Monica is another woman. As noted, Jenna is in for some rough time with the loan shark and maybe Monica gets taken and broken as well. Could be good but too long since the last chapter.