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Great story -- enjoyed it immensely
This is so well written! And it describes the situation with precision and detail. I really enjoyed it -- keep up the good work!
Great Story
Dear Goode,
A most excellent tale of the afternoon delight! I enjoyed your short and simple style and the use of non-traditional language that could sometimes upset certain readers. After reading your profile I can see the finest maturity of a woman well in touch of emotions and sexuality. This is more pleasing than the stories itself.
Mr_Breeze
codyscamp@hotmail.com
Loved it.
However, noticed that you have not written anything since 2004, does this mean that you no longer wish to write? If not this would be a great loss as your writing is clean and crisp. Sometimes short short stories are a welcome change.
Perhaps you would like to take a look at some of my work too, when you have the time. You'll find me under BDSM and other stories...lol?
By the way, your location stated South West, may I ask South West of where?
Peter
thepeterblofly@aol.com
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