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Liked it lots, different but good
I liked it as it was different, and got me to thinking what if... Good job
PB
Most Excellent!
Loved It, More Please!
Neat Idea, Well Presented
I thoroughly enjoyed the premise presented in your story. That said, I feel you should have sment more time developing the characters themselves, and possibly have the mutation manifest itself over a longer period of time. I usually don't care for the one page Lit stories, but feel this has a lot of potential, and plenty of room for development.
Writing Style - A+
You're one of the better writers on this site, I hope you continue to contribute.
SSW_1050
The idea was to see whether people liked the premise, before deciding whether to expand upon it. I assume yours would be a vote to expand the story.
Unique concept!!
I've no idea where you can take this, but it is way to interesting to let die with a one-page chapter. Thanks, 5*.
Yes, really great story - well written and it certainly was at a level rarely seen but very well received !! Yes, I think Amber and her brother should have real sex and keep that link going. I think another chapter is in order, so they can all experience all the family combinations. Might as well as that link won't go away it seems.
Thanks.
Extending Story
Looks like I've got several votes for expanding/extending this story. I'll add it to my stack, as I've got some other non-incest stories that probably deserve additional chapters first.
Wow
Just wow. Fucking genius. And for once I've been unable to fully imagine a concept in a story... That is just massive.
love it
This is a genius idea. I would love to see where is goes, please continue!!!!
Sci-fi incest erotica? YES, PLEASE?
Don't see things like this very often so it's a breath of fresh air! Not to mention, totally hot!
Interesting story
Maybe a sequel?
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
Keep writing
Holy shit that was the best orgasm I had sense my boyfriend left. That was a good story. Keep writing. Great story line.
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