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Meeting a needy in Moray, Highland

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by Lavender1008/10/16

Just my opinion but I quickly lost interest. There's no conversation, no flirting, no sexy looks or smiles. Just two nameless people meet for the first time, walk into a hotel room, have a glass of water and fuck. They "chat" a lot, but we have no idea what they say. You need dialogue. There's also lots of errors.

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