"Click, Click, Click"

Loved it

Brilliant!

Terrific

Terrific story well told.******

liked it but it was a bit too short unless you plan to add another chapter.

Holy shit

One of the best stories so far, but unless there's a part two, it would be nice if it was longer.

If only...

You write very well.

If only you could write real incest/taboo stories, with a real mom & son instead of ALWAYS bringing in Dads girlfriend or his second wife in the picture.

That is NOT incest/taboo.

The son may as well have sex with Dad's cook or his travel agent as the relationship with the son in those cases would be no different than with Dad's girlfriend or his second wife !

Do please try and write a few real incest/taboo stories.

Thanks

Sexy

Great story with great descriptions. Could really get a better idea of both characters than the typical erotica. I really like how it turns out the dad was still in love with the mom, it was unpredictable to me, but very touching, definitely haven't come across anything like that before. It was creative, AND well thought out. I would've liked a more finished ending (this seemed a bit abrupt), but it was okay. And please don't take that previous comment to heart. Incest most definitely counts as family relations of any type, or taboo, whether it's mother and son or someone who's a distant cousin. Stepchildren getting married definitely counts as taboo (even if it may be more socially acceptable than before), so I think you did the right thing. That previous poster has probably grown too conditioned or not exposed to enough. Honestly, I think your story had very refreshing roles and I'm sick of seeing erotica about fathers raping daughters or mothers and sons "true love." There are plenty of those. You do you.