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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/14/04

no

n o no
we are turtles
the famous turtles that the whole of universe and todays pancakes rest on and slide off of, syrup and all.
next to and slightly above are other peoples plates.
silver knives forks spoons Fords Chevys napkins
and the rest

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by LeBroz06/04/08

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