All Comments on 'Falling Snow Ch. 03'

Loving it and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

There were a few misspelled words, like quite instead of quiet and -hilariously- pubic school instead of public school. but nothing serious.

Keep up the good work

Ya I saw that. I'll get an edit to the story submitted later today. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

So far a very enjoyable story and a very enjoyable read. Succubus stories are my 3rd favorite type of story with werewolf my favorite followed by vampire. You have a good plot with excellent character development. I hope there are further chapters planned for this story. Retired Army NCO

Liked this chapter more than the last one.

Another great chapter , hopefully we won't have to wait too long for the next

Another well written sequel with yet another plot twist, I'm enjoying this series, thanks for writing it.

So I've read 3 chapters and have no clue where this story is going (a good thing I'm sure). I think the best part of you writing in the 3 chapters I've read so far is the ambiguity of where the storying is going to go. I've read better written stories (I'm not saying you don't have talent), but the mystry you leave tops many of the best stories I've read here on Literoticia and even some of the great classics of literature. Yours are among the best to keep me confused and hooked. I can't wait to read what's next.