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by Anonymous03/22/04

This is great

I can't wait for the next chapters! She's in for some hard times :)

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by Anonymous06/02/11

Getting too stupid

How stupid can a writer be? Apparently, based on this story, very stupid.

Winning on crazy luck may happen 1 in 1000 times. However, 5 times would be impossible. He wins bowling because slips and then hewins the football throw because the ball slipped--how stupid.

And he cannot shoot an arrow but gets a bullseye. How very unrealistic. The same for the miniture gold and baseball.

There is nothing wrong with the outcome provided it was realistic and it is totally unrealistic.

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