I truly got into this story. More so than with many that I read. I think it is the writer's ability to describe the action of his characters in an erotic, yet different way.
Examples:
"...feeling the fullness that she longed for..."
"...she felt his thickness move across her well-lubricated slit.."
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Excellent description
I truly got into this story. More so than with many that I read. I think it is the writer's ability to describe the action of his characters in an erotic, yet different way.
Examples:
"...feeling the fullness that she longed for..."
"...she felt his thickness move across her well-lubricated slit.."
"...velvety steel..."
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