All Comments on 'Mother's Life Ch. 03'

by 94undertaker26

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

If he's duct taped her eyes all week, she has no eyebrows left.

A teenage boy lasting an hour for any sexual activity?

Anyone sawing away on anal for an hour?

$200? If she can't make that in a week of burger flipping, she would never have maintained an apartment.

Your plot idea is solid, but many details are tripping the readers' ability to go with the flow of it.

gentleone58gentleone58almost 8 years ago
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The one thing in this story that puzzles me is since she is cuffed, blindfolded and essentially gagged by the tape how does she strip? Her being cuffed would interfere with being stripped. A not too bad premise though. I agree with the other post about the eye brows as well.

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