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lost me
why would she go so far with a jerk? delay him but leave him with his junk
hanging out, a perfect put down.
She is so BAAAAD!
What better way to get the "perfect timing" guy LATE for a very important date?!!??
How did he explain why he was so late for that so-important T-time?
Pretty good
A few continuity errors: Greg when it should have been Tyler, that kind of thing. Looking forward to the next installment.
Very good, especially the build up, cant wait to see the next installment.
Continuity fixed
Thanks for feedback. Fixed the name thing and a few other details. Curious as to where people think it's going.
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