All Comments on 'The Sleeptight Inn'

Glad to see you're still around! I would have liked more focus on the battle of wills, and the sexual encounters themselves, but the concept is good and this is ripe for a sequel.

Incidentally, some tag advice: I would use "nonconsent", not "non con" or "non-con" or "noncon". It's what people generally look for. Also, "drugged" or "drug" probably fits this story.

...something....sinister, just below the level of conscious thought, somewhere between sight and sound...but ever present...in the Twilight Zone.

Really, we came into this well in-progress series of "handoffs", leaving us intrigued, but very slightly dismayed. So not so much story, as sketch, unless you have more....

Too many loose ends, too many questions.

Where did the green-eyed woman go. Will Ashley be his slave? Or will she be another of Victoria's growing collection?...just for starters.

More.....we need more!

Thank you for something new and different.

Now don't make us go all FTDS on your literary ass.....please write the sequel.

mmmmm......a quietly evil tinge to it. very nice

Quietly hidden in the middle of nowhere the last thing you would expect . More so that the nature of her dress stand out - both the red and the stark black leather, both of which would be out of place in that normal setting . Tied to the emerald green eyes the whole look is almost felt rather than written. Certainly brings the whole scenario to life within the imagination - kudos x