Yet one more mindless, poorly written teenage sex fantasy POS. Find another hobby, junior, you don't know shit about sex, writing, or being interesting. 1 star for having the gall to show up at all.
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Anonymous05/05/16
please
L.W has all the stupid complainers that hate all stories,Please do not try to hate the stories here,Encourage the writers and maybe we can get good stories here.
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Anonymous05/05/16
needs serious editing
The story could benefit greatly from serious editing and proof reading. Take this example; "engulfed me cock" which if done properly should read " engulfed my cock". Very easy to see why some are able to see where complaints are justified.
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Anonymous05/05/16
hey, Drizzy, pay no attention to the negative POS commenter
This is a very good story about the tensions of a boy who's going to fuck his own mother for the first time, and about a sex-savvy mom who knows that her own kid's got everything she needs to satisfy her cuntal passions. He's a devoted muff-diver, which mothers always appreciate in their sons. "I licked her pussy and tasted her juices. It felt so right." Of course it did, pal--you were slurping away at the same hairy hole you came out of. Nothing can ever feel as right to a boy like his own mother's cunt. And nothing can ever thrill a mom like her own boy sticking his hard young cock up between her thighs and unloading his hot young balls up his own damn birth canal. Five stars, Mr. D, and more, please, lots more.
Ignore the idiot that left his piece of shit comments. He has left almost identical comments time and time again and he obviously doesn't have the inteligence to write something different. The errors in your work are hardly worth negative comments.
fucking mom while dad may arrive any minute was hot. nice plot. write more on this mom-son fuck wile dad is around..
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Anonymous08/04/16
Suspense in the wife
The parents were coming to our house for dinner. Most of it was ready, some was finishing in the oven.
We went to bed, watching the clock. In seconds he had his meat in me and we counted out the minutes, pausing our lovemaking every time he was about to cum and discussing where they might be.
When we decided their car would be three streets away we went for it and he blew a beautiful load inside me. He probably looked fucked when he answered the door but every now and then during the evening I felt a drip slide down my thigh that made me give them such a wonderful look. I still wonder if any of them realized why.
The suspense of their journey was a real kick to our coupling.
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Anonymous10/23/16
It has been said a man is born via the vagina then spends life time getting back up it, this fellow tried the very one he was born down.
English
Chapter 2?
Possibly a second chapter, maybe?
Piece of shit crap
Yet one more mindless, poorly written teenage sex fantasy POS. Find another hobby, junior, you don't know shit about sex, writing, or being interesting. 1 star for having the gall to show up at all.
please
L.W has all the stupid complainers that hate all stories,Please do not try to hate the stories here,Encourage the writers and maybe we can get good stories here.
needs serious editing
The story could benefit greatly from serious editing and proof reading. Take this example; "engulfed me cock" which if done properly should read " engulfed my cock". Very easy to see why some are able to see where complaints are justified.
hey, Drizzy, pay no attention to the negative POS commenter
This is a very good story about the tensions of a boy who's going to fuck his own mother for the first time, and about a sex-savvy mom who knows that her own kid's got everything she needs to satisfy her cuntal passions. He's a devoted muff-diver, which mothers always appreciate in their sons. "I licked her pussy and tasted her juices. It felt so right." Of course it did, pal--you were slurping away at the same hairy hole you came out of. Nothing can ever feel as right to a boy like his own mother's cunt. And nothing can ever thrill a mom like her own boy sticking his hard young cock up between her thighs and unloading his hot young balls up his own damn birth canal. Five stars, Mr. D, and more, please, lots more.
Good story
Seems all the commenters forgot their names. Story was good. We all need an editor.
Waiting for next chapter. Thanks . 5 stars
Good story
Waiting for next chapter. 5 stars Thanks
Reply to: Piece of shit crap
Ignore the idiot that left his piece of shit comments. He has left almost identical comments time and time again and he obviously doesn't have the inteligence to write something different. The errors in your work are hardly worth negative comments.
I'll be happy to read more of your stories.
open mind guy
that is a very hot lovely story keep it up
nice
fucking mom while dad may arrive any minute was hot. nice plot. write more on this mom-son fuck wile dad is around..
Suspense in the wife
The parents were coming to our house for dinner. Most of it was ready, some was finishing in the oven.
We went to bed, watching the clock. In seconds he had his meat in me and we counted out the minutes, pausing our lovemaking every time he was about to cum and discussing where they might be.
When we decided their car would be three streets away we went for it and he blew a beautiful load inside me. He probably looked fucked when he answered the door but every now and then during the evening I felt a drip slide down my thigh that made me give them such a wonderful look. I still wonder if any of them realized why.
The suspense of their journey was a real kick to our coupling.
It has been said a man is born via the vagina then spends life time getting back up it, this fellow tried the very one he was born down.
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