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Sister Tempts Brother

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/05/16

hot story, could've been longer

i liked where you went with it but i think including a little more background and putting dialogue in would've helped out alot

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by Anonymous05/05/16

More

Please continue.

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by Anonymous05/05/16

Good start!

Now continue their expanding relationship and life together!

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by Anonymous05/05/16

to short to quick

needed a lot more background! background! background! its was Sis saying just check me out in bikini then next she nude and sucking dick

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by horny2doit05/05/16

Mmmm - so damn HOT - Yes we have to have more info Plus what they obviously do next ..... what brought that on ?? Maybe, getting her brother to screw here many times Before leaving for college ??

Something to compare to etc. I wonder what her coming home for semester break will be like 6 months from now ! Please more and thank you.

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by Anonymous05/06/16

A nice start if there's more to come I hope there is a good story to wrap around the sex.

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by Anonymous05/06/16

Potential....

We need a prologue! And i do hope you tell more at a time than just snippets. This entry is diary-like

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