All Comments on 'Consent Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Why would Jackie's situation be hopeless?

The human condition rarely allows for the type of capitulation you assume. Something about every dog having it's day. I see Jackie killing Johanna soon.

sublockedsublockedalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Why would Jackie's situation be hopeless? REPLY

Hopeless in the sense that the old wasted and ill-formed person called Jack has been left behind in the old world where he was doomed to live his fantasies alone and afraid. Perhaps I should have used another term, but to those that have these fantasies, feeling hopeless IS part of the fantasy. It's like being in a bondage situation and knowing the rope is stronger than you are. If it isn't, then what's the point?

subguygcsubguygcalmost 8 years ago
Beautiful

Another masterful installment to this story I wish I was in. Man he's one lucky slave

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