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Homunculus Diaries Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/29/16

Anticipation

Great story! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

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by jpz007ahren04/29/16

Cute

Wow... some of the scientific descriptions are very interesting. 50 batches... just wow.

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by kelprime04/30/16

Interesting

The viewpoint of a newborn non-human was pretty cool. Although it was a bit bland besides the cute factor.

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by Anonymous05/07/16

hah

great! i like the writing and style to this!

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