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After the Fact Ch. 03

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by Jules46604/29/16

Make Lila come back

I'm still hoping that somehow Something magical happens and Lila comes back to life. I hope this is all a bad dream that Marucs is having! He needs her in his life to make this story complete 😩😩

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by emj41704/30/16

I feel so sad for both of them...she knew she loved him and he was in denial. Marcus should not linger in punishing himself for never taking the reins in cementing the hookups into something more; learn from what he did not do. I think we will learn through this journey that what they had was deeper than either realized. She cared enough to tell her mom about him, while he cared enough to think 'not my Lila' when reading about her death.

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by Sweet2touch05/02/16

Hmmmm

There is a definite lesson in this story!!! Waiting to see how this really comes together.....

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by Lulu22205/04/16

This made me 😭.

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