All Comments on 'The Last Father-Daughter Vacation'

Great story keep it going it wasn't too into detail but just enough to keep you hanging in there

More, More, More, Please!

yes I want more of this story and I would like it to be just as hot

Please for the love of EVERYTHING, continue this into a novel! I really hope this is just the introduction....." Please, may I have some more? " Excellent beginning....

please continue great start of a beautiful relationship to begin

A very promising start, I'm looking forward to a lot more of this story.

The story feels very empty, like a cheap porno " I'm here to fix the cable lets fuck" kind of thing. The characters seem hollow lacking in depth. No internal conflicts. Sorry just not working for me.

yes post part 2 here to read

A very good start to a good story line! Please write more about the blooming relationship!

Many young women get a huge thrill out of making daddy hard. They tease and like when dad jo for them.In right circumstances more can happen..

Where is the story?

You have so little confidence in your own story you'll only continue it if people kiss your ass?

<P>

Since that's the case, don't bother.

what a load of crap. this isn't a part of anything. more like part 0.1 don't bother posting anouther bit, would of marked it 0.1

again crap.

You have a good start with this story. All stories are not for all readers, so don't let those who were so critical get you down. I find you have a certain flair in your writing which is refreshing. Keep trying and you'll only get better. Looking forward to finding out more about this sexy tale. (or should I say tail?)

You are off to a great start with story. I know what is going to happen but I want to read about it.

Good start, rushed ending.

"Let me know if I should tell you all about what happens next in part 2!"

yes you should

Pretty erotic, but I agree that the finish was a little fast. You can be very descriptive and I suggest using that talent while writing. It will keep you on focus and not rushed into finishing the ending so fast. I would definitely like you to write Part2 so we can see where this goes. How kinky are they? Is this a love story or just a trashy story between dad and daughter? Did daughter bring any secret toys with her? Your mind is your highway. Just follow it to get where you want to go.

As a father of three beautiful daughter's all I can say is I will be coming here everyday waiting for part two, three,..... Pay no attention to those that think they are book critics, you tell your story your way. All of your new fans are waiting young lady make us cum as hard as you made your daddy. DaddyDave.

Okay, I wish it wasn't so typical and shit, I mean, a little self hatred about getting turned on about your father or daughter makes it less... fake.

Makes the story seem more real and shit.

Sadly incest turns me on, considering that I fucked me older brother when I was 15 and he was 17. And my older cousin when I was 16 and he was 28.

Even my lil brother who was 11 has touched my tits. Ugh.

It's so gross and nasty and omg, the guilt and shame, but it's so god damn addicting.

And I can't even date anyone or watch pornos without giving people roles.

Like I'm the daughter/baby girl or lil sis and the other person has to have a related role. Other than incest and how creepy I feel about it, the whole master/slave thing is a must for me.

Although I find a guy being the sub a major turn off.... there's nothing really arousing to me when a girl is domming.

But that's just me.

I liked the story overall.

Please finish it?

-Beast

Unless you aer going to be writing a page a day I think it is too short.

It just got interesting and you shut it down.

This was great. Part2 asap

Several chapters would be well received!

More chapters. Now please

I sincerely hope you are writing chapter two already. Good story ignore the idiots keep writing.

I'd love to hear more about your vacation with your dad .

Love to read more about your holiday with dad!

Yes give me more. So, So good!!

It is about time for the rest of the story

I’m waiting on part 2 cause part 1 was hot

I had my hand in my lap the whole time I was reading this- keep it going!!

Part 2 please.

Absolutely!!!

Just don't include another woman. Make it just between them.

You sound so hot an sexy I would love to take your dad's place an fuck you. But anyway yes more please