Good start, Hope that Vance starts talking about making her pregnant and she starts begging him to do so, and maybe throwing away her birth control pills and cutting Bob off from fucking her. Then, when Bob & Sabrena get married, Vance will be their best man, who will be the only one to fuck her on their wedding night. Lots of great potential here. Keep it going. Ei
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Anonymous03/22/04
Do NOT follow the previous advise.
Do you realize how many stories have the exact same plot as was outlined? Too many. It'd be like watching "Ghostbustes 2." All it is is a point by point remake.
This is a reply to the previous person who deemed my story worthy enough to post a comment, yet stayed anonymous... why *are* you anonymous? You realize just about every other story, movie, song, etc, has already been "done"? Just because themes are the same does not mean there are no other interpretations.
I am surprised at people like you who post negative comments (I got 2 in private feedback, even though the vast majority have been positive [thank you all]), yet you hide behind anonymity? I do not mind constructive criticism, but I find it interesting that someone can take the time to read a story, write something about it, and their only comment is "it's been done before."
So what? The title and description are both pretty clear. If this is a theme that interests you, by all means read, and you can criticize if you want. But why waste your time reading something that you already know will be a "waste of your time?"
*shrugs*
For your information, I will be writing other chapters in this story, and yes, they will follow the same theme, so you don't have to read them if you don't want to.
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Anonymous03/23/04
Play again...PLEASE
I loved the story. Excellent topic. I hope there are many more chapters. Just be careful not to get too carried away...I've done that around chapter 3 or 4 of some of my stories. (I'm staying anonymous to keep anyone from ever comparing my work to others...saying I stole your (or others) ideas)
I TOTALLY agree with your response to the other person. There only are so many topics to choose from. After that it is your own little spin on it. If people like myself like reading stories like this, then I say people like you should keep writing them. It's the little difference in interpretation that makes it all worthwhile.
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Anonymous03/24/04
SUPERIOR!!
Always love to read a good cuckold story involving
superior black men with white couples. You are
on the right track. Keep humiliating the white-boy,
I love it!!!
I realy love reading these types of stories... I get hot thinking of good looking white women getting their pussies filled by large black cocks. I wish I was with a white woman who I could share this fantasy with.
English
Cuckold
Good start, Hope that Vance starts talking about making her pregnant and she starts begging him to do so, and maybe throwing away her birth control pills and cutting Bob off from fucking her. Then, when Bob & Sabrena get married, Vance will be their best man, who will be the only one to fuck her on their wedding night. Lots of great potential here. Keep it going. Ei
Do NOT follow the previous advise.
Do you realize how many stories have the exact same plot as was outlined? Too many. It'd be like watching "Ghostbustes 2." All it is is a point by point remake.
Why be Anonymous?
This is a reply to the previous person who deemed my story worthy enough to post a comment, yet stayed anonymous... why *are* you anonymous? You realize just about every other story, movie, song, etc, has already been "done"? Just because themes are the same does not mean there are no other interpretations.
I am surprised at people like you who post negative comments (I got 2 in private feedback, even though the vast majority have been positive [thank you all]), yet you hide behind anonymity? I do not mind constructive criticism, but I find it interesting that someone can take the time to read a story, write something about it, and their only comment is "it's been done before."
So what? The title and description are both pretty clear. If this is a theme that interests you, by all means read, and you can criticize if you want. But why waste your time reading something that you already know will be a "waste of your time?"
*shrugs*
For your information, I will be writing other chapters in this story, and yes, they will follow the same theme, so you don't have to read them if you don't want to.
Play again...PLEASE
I loved the story. Excellent topic. I hope there are many more chapters. Just be careful not to get too carried away...I've done that around chapter 3 or 4 of some of my stories. (I'm staying anonymous to keep anyone from ever comparing my work to others...saying I stole your (or others) ideas)
I TOTALLY agree with your response to the other person. There only are so many topics to choose from. After that it is your own little spin on it. If people like myself like reading stories like this, then I say people like you should keep writing them. It's the little difference in interpretation that makes it all worthwhile.
SUPERIOR!!
Always love to read a good cuckold story involving
superior black men with white couples. You are
on the right track. Keep humiliating the white-boy,
I love it!!!
Great Story
I realy love reading these types of stories... I get hot thinking of good looking white women getting their pussies filled by large black cocks. I wish I was with a white woman who I could share this fantasy with.
Another racist tale...
This is another racist story...written by a black man that feels his ego will be high if he writes this bullshit...1*
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