I read your comment on chapter 1 where you stated you were using a theme. Wrong. About the only thing that doesn't make this a rewrite of so many other stories is the being specific on what meal he is cooking. Other than that, this displayed zero effort.
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Anonymous03/24/04
Less than 5 seconds because
he just downloaded any old wimp husband story and did a 'find & replace' on the names.
About as original as reciting the alphabet.
I'll leave these negative comments to show others what good writing is all about. It is good that I have so many other fans, and as I said before, thank you all. I do wish some of my anonymous critics would show themselves, and perhaps they can show us their version of "real" storywriting?
Oh well, one can hope.
To my fans: Chapter 3 has been submitted, and this one took a whole 10 seconds to write. I guess I'm improving? :)
-Bob
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Anonymous03/24/04
My cock is hard.
My cock is hard so that must mean I enjoyed your tale very much. Thanks and lets have some more chapters.
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Anonymous03/24/04
Sins of the white race????
Sins of the white race? What a load of racist crap!
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Anonymous03/24/04
FANTASTIC!!
Forget any negative comments. I could read this
type of story line all day!! Being a wanna-be,
white-boy, cuckold for black cock, cant get enough
of the superior black man. PLEASE CONTINUE
YOUR STORY!
I thoroughly enjoyed both of your stories. Please continue the saga. I would like to know what happens to the slut and her chuckold.
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Anonymous03/29/04
Excellent Start
Excellent story, I think he needs to be even more submisive to all of them, how about they use him as their toilet before and after. I think also he needs to do a bit of serious ass licking
Grade A story;but quit with the gay stuff alright!
I'd give it 100 but the cocksucking of the white man turned me off. That's just plain disgusting. I mean if i had a wife like sabrina, and i wanted to have her sleep with niggers, then the first thing i'd make sure is who's in charge? me that's who. I decide who my wife fucks and how.
Black Alpha males have the right to breed White wives. Period. Thats all that matters. I want the woman I love to get fucked hard and bred by Nigger masculinity.
That had to be one of the most racist comments I have seen up here
This is coming from a black male. I get that you have your kinks, but your underlying mentality behind it is racist. You have managed to offend two races with one comment.
English
Did this take you five seconds to write
I read your comment on chapter 1 where you stated you were using a theme. Wrong. About the only thing that doesn't make this a rewrite of so many other stories is the being specific on what meal he is cooking. Other than that, this displayed zero effort.
Less than 5 seconds because
he just downloaded any old wimp husband story and did a 'find & replace' on the names.
About as original as reciting the alphabet.
Ahhhh.... the power of anonymity
I'll leave these negative comments to show others what good writing is all about. It is good that I have so many other fans, and as I said before, thank you all. I do wish some of my anonymous critics would show themselves, and perhaps they can show us their version of "real" storywriting?
Oh well, one can hope.
To my fans: Chapter 3 has been submitted, and this one took a whole 10 seconds to write. I guess I'm improving? :)
-Bob
My cock is hard.
My cock is hard so that must mean I enjoyed your tale very much. Thanks and lets have some more chapters.
Sins of the white race????
Sins of the white race? What a load of racist crap!
FANTASTIC!!
Forget any negative comments. I could read this
type of story line all day!! Being a wanna-be,
white-boy, cuckold for black cock, cant get enough
of the superior black man. PLEASE CONTINUE
YOUR STORY!
superb
i wish i was him
Thank You
I thoroughly enjoyed both of your stories. Please continue the saga. I would like to know what happens to the slut and her chuckold.
Excellent Start
Excellent story, I think he needs to be even more submisive to all of them, how about they use him as their toilet before and after. I think also he needs to do a bit of serious ass licking
Grade A story;but quit with the gay stuff alright!
I'd give it 100 but the cocksucking of the white man turned me off. That's just plain disgusting. I mean if i had a wife like sabrina, and i wanted to have her sleep with niggers, then the first thing i'd make sure is who's in charge? me that's who. I decide who my wife fucks and how.
wow that is as hot a story as I've read
I love the way she is into the black guy but making him push the whole thing.
Racist story...
This is a racist story...One phrase said it all: "Do you wish to repay the black race for the sins of the white race?"...How could LW have it here? 1*
Love.
Black Alpha males have the right to breed White wives. Period. Thats all that matters. I want the woman I love to get fucked hard and bred by Nigger masculinity.
That had to be one of the most racist comments I have seen up here
This is coming from a black male. I get that you have your kinks, but your underlying mentality behind it is racist. You have managed to offend two races with one comment.
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