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Short but gold
Sweet just as much as the 1st chapter, love it how the keep comming back to those innocent moments of childhood but with added hotness. I was hoping for something longer but wasn't disappointed in the end.
Another 5*!
They're longer than the first time.
This comment is basically addressing comments about the story/chapter being a bit on the short side.
Arugably the original story, in its compact form would be a lot longer rather than me publishing the story parts piecemeal. Because those who read this story the first time around on Pastebin know how I was pleased with the response.
However I will be the first to admit that I was a bit lazy the first time around because I wasn't expecting it to become a full story. So I see this as a refreshing way to go back and correct some mistakes I made, and maybe pen a bit more content to the story. I was lazy back then. So this time around I hope I can give this story the treatment it deserves.
As it stands, I MIGHT be gathering together the pieces of back story after the basic story is finished. Most of it at this point is set a few days before we first had sex, but it will likely answer a lot of questions readers might have at that point.
Other than That First Night, I do also have a couple more stories that I am considering putting here on Lit. We'll see how things pan out.
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