All Comments on 'Creation's Guardian Ch. 09'

everything is well and good.

nice story

but could you drop the silly nicknames please?

they give me goosebumps and not in a good way.

Great story...write it your way...I anxiously await each chapter. Keep 'em coming!

I love the way you made this chapter. The whole story is great even if it took you a while to get the storyline rolling further than just sex. I'm absolutely looking forward to the next chapter. One thing that had me absolutely rolling with laughter was the way Stacy told everybody off. That was perfectly placed in the story. I do wonder what the powers of the other children will be. You never told us what they were going to be. Other than that I say keep up the wonderful work.

Very well thought out, presented and written. Keep going.

this is a great and wonderful story, but you went overboard with the nickmnames. ex: Hot lips. all in all its a great story. keep going.

This is probably my second time through the entire series, I've gone through and read favorite chapters more often, and I'm now just getting around to commenting.

I am indeed thoroughly enjoying the story. If I have a complaint, it is I think the sex between Bob and his women can be at times a little too cookie cutter. Although certainly not with the last three goddesses. I think those last three were very distinct and individualized. I thought it was outstanding and very erotic.

Although in your defense, it is possible that Bob is trying to give each of his women not only just what they need, but also nothing less than their sisters are receiving. And fair certainly is, as they say, fair.

I would like to thank you for the hours of entertainment I have received through your work. I thoroughly Enjoy the hard sex scenes, but I Love the story.

Your servant Sir,

pmpiper

i like the changes you made to the sex scenes. it is not all the same and i enjoy how you paint the picture with your words... this is going to be a favorite read of mine. thanks for your hard work.

Love the series with all the Nuances. However.... Houston? You know it was built on a Swamp right? The closest beach is 65 miles away in Galveston. But hey, it all works for a great story. Well done keep up the good work.

At the start of this segment ( chapters ) you mentioned it might bring out the haters . I can only see genius . So good . Such an entertaining read .

Oh and to the other guy . I think he said Dallas . Not Houston .

Great construction. Loving it