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Great Little Story
Love love your story but please keep it going.
Looking forward to the next part.
Really good
But I hope he trains her to be free
charming little story
short chapters, keep'em coming!
Loved it.
This is great, cute in places funny in others, I hope it continues.
Interesting
I like her, she is naive, but given her situation its to be expected. Can't wait for more.
Sad
I'm sad you didn't continue. It was really well written. I waited but it seems it's not gonna happen. Nice story tho. Good job. :)
Please Continue!
Exactly that. This story was really well written and I instantly fell in love with the world you were creating. The first two came out so quickly that this pause has me very worried you don't intend to continue. Please do! I've been checking back here every couple days since you posted this chapter and I'll continue to do so, so keep going, it's great!
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