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Bolt Ch. 01

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by zena9905/02/16

Good start

Same as my title, good start. I'd like to see how this develops....

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by Anonymous05/02/16

This is a good opening

I look forward to seeing how this story turns out, but you might want to slap it down. The story felt rushed in the hospital.

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by Anonymous05/07/16

I enjoyed this, keep it up

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