Snow Day

It was a good start but it ended too soon. What's the sense of writing a mother/son porn story and stopping it just when the mother and son are about to have sex! Hopefully you'll have the next part written and published shortly.

Good

Great start, hope it continues.

Wow!

But you can't leave it there, hanging like the coach in 'The Italian Job'! Please bring us part two, and please hurry ;) !

Four stars for the cliff-hanger ending, five if you come up with the goods!

Please.

There must be more, Please.

Holy shit

Here is what made this story do hot, your location.....i live very clise to the area tgat you use in this story!

how old is the daughter since she is either younger or not cute enough for him? will she be brought in revealing her night time finger sessions about her brother?

Wow!!!!

Awesome! Have her fuck him in the ass with her fingers. Then while she gives him a sexy handjob she can pull giant tootsie roll shit burgers out of his stinky ass. Then she can eat them after he barfs on them.

Interesting Start

Fun to see a local reference too...
Let's see chapter 2.

wtf

what the fuck is wrong with the anon. commenter with shit eating thing? are you that fucked in the head, if that is your idea of a good thing you need to seek help before you have kids of your own if you already have them then find someone else to raise them now.

nice!

while my first reaction was "noooo, where's page 2???!!" I remembered the old Hollywood afage, "always leave them wanting more!"

very well paced and written, you could feel the sexual tension building throughout the piece.

hope you write more soon.

unexpect end

I hope don't be the end

McHenry county represent!

Its cool to see local talent trying their hand at writing with this topic. Even better when the work is good. Good show.

@tootsie roll- dude. Wtf. Its one thing to comment that during anal its something that can show up when you dont get a chance to clear out stock. But its not a picnic, eating ass and eating out of an ass is not the same thing.

Sexy Read****

CHYTOWN really enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing

ends just as it gets good...

Natural Style

You have an alluring style that sucked me in. Natural and unpretentious...and sexy. I hope to read more from you.

Part 2?

Please make a part 2! Loved the story! Can't help but believe his sister is going to join!

Sister is secretly watching and masturbating in her panties

Hot start. Noel could be hiding and masturbating to the image of her brother eating mom's dripping snatch. She gets caught when she stumbles after a massive orgasm. Next mom and sis team up for a double BJ. After that some lesbian action and then son fucks mom and eats sisters pussy.