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Good Story
A well told story, I really enjoyed it. It wasn't overly long, nor too fast in getting to climax. You are very articulate, but there were a couple of annoying typos. Words that your spellchecker said were OK, but the wrong word for the context. However, that did not distract from the overall story.
Shale
Deliciously naughty
The story was like a delicious chocolate cake- light, smooth and an absolute turn on
Good Story.
Good Story.I hope there is a part 2 in the works.
Not bad at all...
A decent story told well.
Good story
Not a lot of bullshit background and dialog. People don't come here to read young adult fiction, they come to read about sex. You summed it up nicely.
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