Fuck that. That's too much work and I wouldn't go to most of them. As for the rest, if he's that clueless then let him be. He's too fucking stupid to be allowed to procreate.
Is the stuff Mac told him really true or is it just revenge? Can he ask his wife about it without revealing that he touched Angie´s ass? Could he even believe her? Can he ask the other men without revealing he´s totally clueless?
to offset the asshole annony who reads all of these stories and then votes a 1 to keep he score low. What a fuck old ugly lonely fat fag this man whore is.
You're too good of a writer/ story teller to waste your effort and reputation on this. When I see your name on a new offering I immediately expect a well written and interesting story. I'm thinking 5 stars at the beginning. This was a disappointment in that it had no story. If this is the beginning of a series or a novella then it should have been mentioned at the beginning. And, it's not to late to develop an story with an ending.
I look forward to your next effort.
OK, so this is not Britease's best. But it's good, nonetheless. And well worth reading for a giggle.
And it only took you a few minutes to read it, so you didn't waste much time on something which turned out to be a little less than what you may have been hoping for.
A fun read about Norfolk folk and no I will not mention the joke about inter breeding in Norfolk, oops!, silly me. Of course originating from Suffolk, now residing in Spain, being referred to as carrot crunchers and tractor boy's I would probably be slower on the uptake than Alan.
Cute. Even without the title, it is clear about half-way through how it is going to end ... or begin!
EddBoy ... Mac is a common nickname for men whose last name is MacAdam or McDuff ... et cetera. Regardless of his surname, like Timothy or Mohammed or Sergio or Gustaf. (Perhaps not so common in Scotland.)
who hoped it would be a longer story, but it's a matter of having the time, a commodity in short supply since I retired. Not helped by the fact that I pressed the wrong button a few months ago. Still not sure what I did wrong but lost half the stuff on by computer, including my entire file of half finished stories and plots. Got to start from scratch again.
Yes, nice and short. Glad to see you writing- a shame about losing the files, I hate when that happens. All my stuff is saved to the cloud nowadays. Hope to see more once you've got things sorted.
English
HA
Short and sweet. We'll, not so sweet. I guess that'll be the last party they attend.
Ha again.
Damn
Well, not so sweet.
Amateur mistake.
eh?
So one guy is pissed that another guy grabbed his wife's ass and proceeds to claim the second guys wife is a whore......this is not a story.
A party ever month?
Fuck that. That's too much work and I wouldn't go to most of them. As for the rest, if he's that clueless then let him be. He's too fucking stupid to be allowed to procreate.
THE LAST TO KNOW
the 1st to care, buyer beware. TK U MLJ LV NV
Not really a story, but instead a good joke...
Not really a story, but instead a good joke...3*
Interesting idea
Is the stuff Mac told him really true or is it just revenge? Can he ask his wife about it without revealing that he touched Angie´s ass? Could he even believe her? Can he ask the other men without revealing he´s totally clueless?
5
to offset the asshole annony who reads all of these stories and then votes a 1 to keep he score low. What a fuck old ugly lonely fat fag this man whore is.
Could have been a nice platform to develope something...
...I regret you have just thrown a few bread crumbs and left it at that. Not really a story...but a nice idea.
Too Short!!!!!!
I like these short stories, but by the time the author gets to the really interesting part he leaves you hanging.
STOP IT!!!!!
Complicated Situation
He should try it with her and see if she would be willing to go into the garden. It does sound like he was unconnected.
"OK, so I lied at the beginning"
Lied ?
No !
Not Britease !
What was that
You started down the btb slope. Why not finish it? I mean finish the damn story.
Hard to find a good flash story!
By that I mean that if the goal is to be very brief, then story telling tends to take a back seat...or the rumble seat.
Chilley
Don't Do THAT!
You're too good of a writer/ story teller to waste your effort and reputation on this. When I see your name on a new offering I immediately expect a well written and interesting story. I'm thinking 5 stars at the beginning. This was a disappointment in that it had no story. If this is the beginning of a series or a novella then it should have been mentioned at the beginning. And, it's not to late to develop an story with an ending.
I look forward to your next effort.
Oh, come on Richie
Lighten up a bit.
OK, so this is not Britease's best. But it's good, nonetheless. And well worth reading for a giggle.
And it only took you a few minutes to read it, so you didn't waste much time on something which turned out to be a little less than what you may have been hoping for.
Lue
Good one Brit
Thanks***
For the story.
Norfolk/Suffolk
A fun read about Norfolk folk and no I will not mention the joke about inter breeding in Norfolk, oops!, silly me. Of course originating from Suffolk, now residing in Spain, being referred to as carrot crunchers and tractor boy's I would probably be slower on the uptake than Alan.
come on brit
That was some JPB bullshit there. You're better than that.
tim and mac
?
Not Too Surprising
Cute. Even without the title, it is clear about half-way through how it is going to end ... or begin!
EddBoy ... Mac is a common nickname for men whose last name is MacAdam or McDuff ... et cetera. Regardless of his surname, like Timothy or Mohammed or Sergio or Gustaf. (Perhaps not so common in Scotland.)
4*
Sorry you guys
who hoped it would be a longer story, but it's a matter of having the time, a commodity in short supply since I retired. Not helped by the fact that I pressed the wrong button a few months ago. Still not sure what I did wrong but lost half the stuff on by computer, including my entire file of half finished stories and plots. Got to start from scratch again.
To the point
Yes, nice and short. Glad to see you writing- a shame about losing the files, I hate when that happens. All my stuff is saved to the cloud nowadays. Hope to see more once you've got things sorted.
Should've lost this one too
Another unfinished cuck & slut story.
No Score
No score because it's not finished!
Did he drag her ass out of there and stop things?
Did he divorce her cheating ass?
Or worse, did he cuck out?
Your right you did lie.
Sorry ???
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