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by Anonymous05/11/16

Compelling

I'm finding myself deeply invested in these characters, who in chapter one seemed superficial in the Literotica stroke story sense that usually causes me to click out. Still, in the beginning, something in your style compelled me to continue, and I'm glad I did. Your pacing is great, and there's a minimalism in your words that is, I suspect, the result of thoughtful editing. I'm hooked. Thank you for sharing.

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