Simon, even thought I'm your editor, this is one of your best stories yet! I hope that others see the great talent that you possess. I am looking forward to reading more chapters of Ms. Flock! Viva her Mistresshood!
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Anonymous03/28/04
Good Work!
This is a hot piece! Very well told, very vivid and very, very arousing. This has the possiblity to go a long way and I look forward to reading more from you.
My only critisism is that you ruled out any chance of more with the amazing 'tennisball'. She is a fantastic creation and it is such a shame that you have gotten rid of her.
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Anonymous11/18/05
Nice!
Nicely done! a bit quick moving, but i still want to read more! :)
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Anonymous02/09/11
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story was hot, sensual and even emotional in it`s way. Please I want more more more!!!!! Keep writing!
English
"Bad Girl" is a "Great Read!"
Simon, even thought I'm your editor, this is one of your best stories yet! I hope that others see the great talent that you possess. I am looking forward to reading more chapters of Ms. Flock! Viva her Mistresshood!
Good Work!
This is a hot piece! Very well told, very vivid and very, very arousing. This has the possiblity to go a long way and I look forward to reading more from you.
My only critisism is that you ruled out any chance of more with the amazing 'tennisball'. She is a fantastic creation and it is such a shame that you have gotten rid of her.
Nice!
Nicely done! a bit quick moving, but i still want to read more! :)
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story was hot, sensual and even emotional in it`s way. Please I want more more more!!!!! Keep writing!
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