All Comments on 'A Bad Girl Ch. 01'

by Simon J.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
"Bad Girl" is a "Great Read!"

Simon, even thought I'm your editor, this is one of your best stories yet! I hope that others see the great talent that you possess. I am looking forward to reading more chapters of Ms. Flock! Viva her Mistresshood!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good Work!

This is a hot piece! Very well told, very vivid and very, very arousing. This has the possiblity to go a long way and I look forward to reading more from you.

My only critisism is that you ruled out any chance of more with the amazing 'tennisball'. She is a fantastic creation and it is such a shame that you have gotten rid of her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice!

Nicely done! a bit quick moving, but i still want to read more! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story was hot, sensual and even emotional in it`s way. Please I want more more more!!!!! Keep writing!

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