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by Tathagata03/17/04

Wistful

but resolved and strong
Very nice
erotic and thoughtful, drowsy dreaming
Fit so well with what is going on and what you're thinking
Thank you

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by jthserra03/21/04

Very good

I liked the restraint you showed with this one, the inward look at sexuality and masturbation, and the sudden turn you took towards darkness. A bit of sad intrigue at the end, the climax clouded by something, something profoundly wrong. An intensely intimate poem... well done.

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by Frank Stein05/25/04

Interesting

I wasn't sure where you were going, but I enjoyed the short journey. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your stories. F.

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