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Condominium Ch. 01

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by DadDavis05/04/16

Another good one

I think I've read all of your stories. They make me seek the same or better quality in other writer's work. So far you are way ahead. Thanks

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by PolyLvr05/06/16

As someone intimated, nothing new here

Well written and enjoyable but, again. Not much different than the rest. I'll stick with it a bit more to see if something pops.
One problem I do have with these stories: there is not nearly enough angst from the formerly monogamous couples. A lifetime of conditioning, even if ready for it, takes a while to overcome. Reassurances, etc. Also, the newly broadsided husband's dick is never average, that is 5-1/2ish inches. Add an average husband with s suddenly free loving wife and an above average paramour, there's gonna be some problems.
Maybe a little explanation from the woman's side about how she went from monogamous to being easily able to cheat, or should I say fuck, another man. No guilt, no remorse.

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by kurtrellians05/11/16

I really have enjoyed this one. Quite believable, and really got me going! I am glad the couples are not jealous and don't fall out. Who wants that?

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by BJwriter07/23/16

Great story

I had thought about a sybian in ages. Used to watch a lady ride one on a website years ago. Not much fun to watch on a webcam. Maybe better in person.

I too thought the slide into group sex went a little to smoothly and quickly. I know you wanted to get into the sex scenes and so did I, but i felt a little cheated that there was not more "ANGST" (as another commenter noted) over the slide from a straight monogamous relationship into swapping partners and group sex. I'd think they would at least talk a bit about it beforehand. The women disappearing and then turning up nude in the bedroom was abrupt. The men shed there clothes much too readily, I thought, from what had gone before.

Still, I liked the story and look forward to reading the succeeding chapters. I have to limit myself, or I won't get any writing done.

Found your work through Creekman. He favorited you and so will I.

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