All Comments on 'A Friendly Blowjob'

Thanks for that, Matt! I love fuck stories and also BJ stories - although there aren't very many of the latter. In my mind there is very little I can think of that's hotter and sexier than watching a gorgeous doll take your cock into her mouth and suck and lick you to orgasm - then swallow the full load of cum that results and continuing to lick the sensitive head of your cock sending you into another world of ecstasy!!

I'm not in any way trying to downplay fucking as the ultimate sex experience - depositing a load of thick juicy warm cum into the babe's reproductive canal - but a superbly done blow job is an ecstasy of its own kind. The babe is really getting nothing out of sucking your cock and swallowing your load of cum, sometimes delivered with great force into the back of her throat while fucking gives her the chance to cum herself and even to ejaculate in some cases.

Truly spoken, I feel that in no way does a blow job, no matter how well performed take the place of a seriously performed fuck with accompanying creampie deposit to the babe's pussy - but what a fucking exciting way to WORK UP to the fuck itself! In other words - enjoy a blow job ON THE WAY TO a fuck for the ultimate sexual experience. Of course you will have to be both able and prepared to cum twice in a relatively short span of time, but most guys who are in the position to be fucking around in the first pace should be able to perform the duties.

In any case guys, keep your cock ready for sucking and fucking at the will of the chick you are doing it with and make it enjoyable for her too!!!! After all, you just might get to finish the job by licking and sucking her pussy into a wild state of ejaculation. There is no sweeter treat that female ejaculation squirts!!!!

This is a story that cab be believed, there is no exageration, nice job.

sorry I can't give it a 10

Great narration

I loved this playful bj

wish there was more drama. .like the gf comes in between

anyways you are master in story telling. .

thanks for sharing

Neo

This is a great story!!!

@neosam, that's currently an idea for a sequel, so we'll see! Glad you enjoyed it.

@vastiesmith2, thanks! Lovely profile. Love your fetish.

and we have a former president that says so, so it must be true!

If he did something to her too.

Short and simple. Efficient writing with little extraneous information. You told us everything we need to know about these characters through their dialog -- which is smart storytelling. Instead of telling us about them, you showed us. You also didn't tell us much about how these characters look, which allows the readers to fill in those gaps as we please. Nicely done.

The next logical step is to follow up with a second chapter. Introduce us to Rachel. Show us a little conflict between this love triangle that all leads to a choice that must be made. The all-too-obvious choice is that he ditches Rachel and goes with Lisa, so throw us a curveball.

Keep up the good work.

One of the best I've read in a long time!

Remember the wakeup BJ that she likes to do for a potential sequel!

Keep up the great work!

"Another bad idea came into my head."

Always the best ideas. Lovely descriptions, enchanting. A penis' best friend? An eager friendly mouth with intention. Sweet.

The dialogue was trendy and realistic, the writing, prose and descriptions were beautifully crafted. Great story! Before I saw your name near the end of the story, I thought you actually were a female. But you wanted some honest critique on your writing so I'll tell you. I caught several mistakes while reading that my mind was able to understand however, I suggest you that make sure you proofread a couple of times for errors so you that can correct them before submitting. Good read though!

@Anonymous, which mistakes, exactly? I didn't notice them earlier, so if you can quote, it would be a big help. I'd love to hear any thoughts you have, though. Thanks!

I second the idea of a morning BJ for the sequel. And for part 3 (or whatever) Lisa could crash Chris' date (maybe a fancy restaurant) and blow him under Rebecca's nose.

Really love the premise, had a similar experience so it made it personally even more exciting. Hope there's a Part 2 coming.

If I could impart any ideas on the future direction though: don't have it escalate to them fucking, to then him breaking up with Rebecca, and ultimately Chris and Lisa "falling in love". There's something extremely hot about a girl wanting to sexually service her guy friend, without any feelings involved in the most casual manner possible just because he “needs” to get off and she’s happy to help.

She should actively encourage the relationship even, be happy for him like any friend would. Blow him before a big date with Rebecca so he’s not too anxious. Have them all go out and all spend time together as a friend group with the girls really getting along, and then have Lisa help him cum while she talks about how much she really likes Rebecca. Maybe even suck Chris’ cock clean upon returning home one time because he and Rebecca were interrupted while having sex. Just a few quick ideas for hot scenarios.

PS Happy to help in any way!

Great story .

Just found and read your story, and yes, Yes, YES!! It confirms everything I love about giving a blow job. At first it was the sense of power, which quickly evaporates as the guys hands find your head. But the one line really sums it up: " All that wasted cum, unappreciated, untasted, unswallowed... ". Driving around the city, I used to look at all the apartment buildings, and wonder how many cocks were wasting loads of yummy cum; how many gallons unsavored .... how FULL i could feel!!

I love hearing a man groan and his hips buck and his hands hold me firmly in place .. to receive his gift to me.

This was really fun to read... and i hope for a sequel!

As far as the mistakes someone had mentioned, the only one that struck me was the line "inhaling my must" where you meant "musk". It was funny because it's one we've all made..... spelling checkers miss them and sometimes they cause them because they recognize your intented word and sometimes substitute their own choice of words.

my best guy friend and i have the exact same thing going on and it was so great to resd this while hes away.

one of the best stories i have read on Literotica

Well balanced narrantion and dialog.

Well paced, not excruating detailed and not too short, not too long.

Would like to read more, maybe they become a couple etc.

Thanks

Dump the no sex girlfriend asap! Take his Best friend off the market, and keep her as happy as she will keep him. It's a no brainer. Hot story 4 stars.

I was certain that this was written by a male as it is so much from the female viewpoint. And a wonderful job you did. I've got to look and see what else you have done. Oh, my wife feels the same way about blowjobs. I swear she has orgasms just sucking me.

Good story. Wish i had a friend like her to take care of my needs. :o}

Damn. It's not easy for a guy to write from a girl's perspective. Nice job. That was hot

I'd have like it if there were more boob involvement than just a flash in the beginning.

Further stories would be avidly read.

Went to the blowjob too fast. It was too obvious it was going to happen, and the trip getting there -- after he came in his pants -- could have been much hotter.

Nice story anyway. What a Girl. I like her.

I wish I could meet someone like her!

Something tells me that the two of them becum regulars at the Salsa dance class. Ummmm dirty dancing......

Liked it. Could've been a little longer. Please write another chapter? Want to know if Rebecca finds out. Maybe she catches them in the act

Very good. Writer has a way with words. :)

That was awesome! I'm female and loved it. Would enjoy a sequel!

Desperately needs a sequel or a series. So many possibilities...

Fantastically written. I struggle a bit with giving blowjobs (strong gag reflex) but reading this makes me want to go practice.

Nice premise.

Five stars.

Very hot and caring - maybe someday I’ll get one? One can only hope.

That what friends are for...

This is what a guy hopes a girl feels, or, rather, hopes HIS girl feels for him.

That was great, and also made me chuckle...'just like a neck rub, only lower down and with my mouth' :D

What a great story! I had a female friend similar to that but nothing ever became of it. We would always verbally flirt around about sex and what we would do to each other, but instead I would always have to masterbate about what we had talked about earlier. She would always tease me and also say that she had to get her vibrator out and get herself off also. Great memories Thanks!

Good premise.

Nice buildup to point where sex action begins.

Then it moves to quickly. And not nearly enough details.

And dialog during sex would be good. This is what the girl in the movie did; do you like it? Should I do it faster? Slower? Would you like me to play with your balls? Like this? Are you getting ready to cum? Do you want to cum now or should I slow down so it lasts longer?

And nothing with her other body parts. She's wearing her lucky bra, but no baring of boobs. No description of what they're like. Or her nipples. She doesn't tease him with them. She doesn't instigate some titty fucking.

And her pussy? Nothing? Why?

And you wrote "She pulled him deeper into his mouth..." You meant HER mouth.

Four stars.

Wonderful and fun story. Thanks for sharing this one.

5-stars.

I wish I was her friend. LOL

Loved it. It surprises me how many men like to read (from the comments), I thought they were more visual beings, ha. F, 40.

Can I have her number?

WHAT CAN A GUY SAY WHEN HIS BEST FRIEND GIVES HIM A BLOW JOB.?????

I really enjoyed the story. It was fun and playful. You show us what we need to know instead of outright telling us. I agree with what someone else said - it's great you didn't tell us what the characters look like, allowing us to complete the picture ourselves. As a woman, it's great to read from a woman's perspective that's not complete trash. It was actually believable, so congrats on that. I look forward to checking out your other stories.

One thing that detracted from the storytelling was seeing the overused "every last drop." That and everyone's eyeballs rolling to the back of their heads during sex are two of the worst tropes in porn and erotica.

Damn, I sure could use a friend like Lisa!

A fun fantasy game. Gosh! Would I like to have a friend like that!

He’s damned fool if he doesn’t marry her.

Bill S.

Enjoyed this story immensely. It is great to have such intriguing comments from a professional cock sucker with amazing story telling capabilities.

Tell us more of your adventures

There is something extremely arousing to fuck a friend. Many years ago, a female friend once fondled my nuts and whispered, "cum in my ass buddy". This was after we had watched an hour of porn.

Sexy and sweet. 🥂

Enjoyable read and written to be believable had a friend like Lisa who we would help each other out with some oral or mutual masturbation taking care of the release for each other.

Great story. Leaking precum thinking about a friend having my cock in her mouth.

Great job

Good read with good piece

Lovely premise.

Could have used some long, slow, teasing/edging of his cock and balls with her hands and her mouth before she tried to make him cum. Get him begging for her to continue. Ask him if he was enjoying the way she was sucking his cock.

Nothing with any parts of her body? Breasts? Pussy? Ass?

Nevertheless, five stars.

Great story well written and left me wanting more. Please a sequel.