All Comments on 'The Walk'

It's "bated breath," not "baited breath." "Bated breath" is holding your breath, as in your breath is abated. "Baited breath" is what you have after you've eaten sushi.

This story was interesting, and mildly erotic. It should have been listed in the "Erotic Coupling" category, rather than "BDSM"

Needs editing... the mistakes rip me out of the story. And being in the BDSM category, I'd hope any sequels are slightly longer and have a little more of the BDSM part. BUT in saying all that, good read, got my solo act sorted quickly ... lol :)

Several comments about this being in the wrong category, it was changed to bdsm by the the site itself from erotic couplings. But thanks for reading :) always appreciate comments