A Bargain Made Ch. 01

fantastic

What a fantastic narration
wish ww can have more chapters
thanks for sharing

Neo

Good Read

I really enjoyed this. It slowly drew me into the characters but left me anticipating the next chapter of this saga.

SaddleRider, this is a brilliant piece of work, absolutely brilliant. Please continue.
Dark Moon

I've read this before

Halfway through page 2 I realized that I have read this story before. Did you publish this story on another site? Are you the real author?

I'm SaddleRider here

and Saddle Rider at the site where you read the story. I post at mcstories as well, but though to share them here to get a bit more feedback. So, yes, I am the actual author. If you've seen them anywhere other than here or there, they aren't authorized by me to be there.

Well done

Too often I read stories that don't understand that you have to build the world and characters in it to make a great story. Teasing just enough to make me want to continue reading. You have done that so well in such a short amount of time, I look forward to more.