All Comments on 'Amanda Adams becomes My Queen Ch. 01'

I don't usually like this style of writing but you have made this easy to read. Keep going.

What a devious, demanding, sensuous Queen. I wish She'd be mine.

Did you mean to type arraignment instead of arrangement on the first page? If so that is a really fucking clever pun!

Yes, how wonderful to have such a Mistress/Queen,one who is both so aware of how to embarrass and humiliate and excite her newly acquired slave. Knowing what will hurt him at the same time solidifying his adoration and need to please her.

Very good story and really would like to know how much and what parts are true. Keep it coming (even if you cannot or not allowed to).

How could any of it possibly be true? It’s entirely aligorical. But I hope that doesn’t rob your enjoyment of it. And you can still ask, “Aligorical for what?”

And that’s a good question. What do you think?