All Comments on 'House Sitting Ch. 03'

Thank you for this series. Chapter 3 was very hot. I can't wait to read about that one particular standout day that he mentioned at the end of the story.

You (and your editors) should proofread, slowly, before posting. For example, poling is not a word. Also, I think you meant clothes, not cloths.

I guess its true what they say.. Death Taxes and Nurses, the three certainties in life.

Pete.

Good series, but you left it too short. The story had a tremendous amount of potential. Think about that when you write again. Looking forward to it.

Sorry but I don't read your stories to edit them as I think they are hot and not to jump on you about spelling of all things.! { must be a boring Teacher reading these stories and has nothing better to do than proof read.} lol

Got you another"5" ~~ that is "3" of them now ~~ you think you can stand another 6 or 7 of those "5's" ? Maybe she has a 18 year old Sister just getting ready to leave home.!**** lol ( just a thought.)

Keep writing and we will keep reading.

all they have to wear are cloths, but I imagine they are easy to remove.

It would be nice to know what the argument with her husband had been about, and how it contributed to her need to have sex with Steven. Personally I find that intriguing information that is missing from the story.

I do not normally comment, but I wonder about how the pop tarts came into the picture? You seem to rush through the story as if to get it over with and finish. When I "house sat" the individual normally actually stays there.

Wish there was more

Richard

[04.04.23]

hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!